Sweater Update

Ugh! It's terrible. How did I manage, despite using the same brand of yarn and size of needles as in this pretty sweater, to make a giant blotchy puffball that makes me look even more columnar than usual?

This is more what I was trying for (the sleeves are not done--not that finishing them in the shortened version is much work--not that they're going to be finished because I have to unravel the whole thing AUGH AUGH AUGH).